Cars Crashing.

High and Dry by Radiohead
Might be the song that finally kills me.
Carefully constructed
For nine months
Built a whole world out of
Seventeen years.
Strengthened, determined
Gutted and incinerated
By an LOL,
GTG.
All the sharp points and inclines
Of line graphs
Dull and flatten on the I-4.
There is no hierarchy
In the overture of a spinning semi.

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~ by Jade Elizabeth on December 22, 2011.

2 Responses to “Cars Crashing.”

  1. I liked your choice of words here. Very powerful.
    Was about the close the page, but then I saw NaNoWriMo on the recent posts column. Definitely suscribing so that maybe I’ll get a taste of your novel one day.
    Wonderful style of writing.

  2. Thank you so much. That really means a lot to me.

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